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The Hawk Ascends

Poetry on the meaning of freedom

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 6 months ago β€’ 1 min read
The Hawk Ascends
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As we introspect on independence this weekend, we consider the meaning of true freedom.

We want freedom from constraint. We want space to grow. To find one's voice.

But...with freedom comes responsibility.

The haw embodies these qualities.

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A hawk spreads its wings

Bird of prey seeks the vast sky

To go forth and soar.

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Hawk within nest bound

From the bindings, seeks release

Touches the wide sky.

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The bold hawk now speaks

He answers for his freedom

And flies forth with truth.

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Yellow beak parted,

Its voice stored in pressed chambers--

Released in a scream.

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The hawk wants to lift --

Not his inner stirring--

But for the needs of others.

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Now soaring the skies

Wings spread to move through silence--

The hawk flies for them.

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inspirational

About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Mother Combs6 months ago

    πŸ’™

  • Excellent take on the concept of Freedom

  • Susan FourtanΓ© 6 months ago

    Very evocative of the symbol of freedom with the majestic eagle at the centre.

  • Mariann Carroll6 months ago

    powerful poem

  • Oh wow, this sure felt very empowering. Loved your poem!

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