The Haunting Of Car 17 - A Glimpse Of Hope Or Holy War?
Part 7 - A Collaboration With Sharon

Then Something arose out of the mist
The sweetest sound across the breeze
The holy bells of the cathedral lifts
Spreading hope amidst the trees
For the first time in 100 years
The veil black had been transcended
Did this portal open to end the fear
Mere expectation was suspended
For face to face stood love and hate
The conductor and the stranger
To trust him may be a mistake
Did he bring hope or differing danger
The demons crawled from beneath every car
To mark the field for impending death
Each bragging about their battle scars
Offering the conductor their last breath
At this, the stranger lifted up
Floating above, exposing his authority
But where did this power derive from
Salvation or conspiracy
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Part One: Me
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Part Two: Sharon
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Part Three: Me
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Part Four: Sharon
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Part Five: Me
Part Six: Sharon
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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Comments (5)
Hehehehehehehe conspiracy maybe? Lol. Waiting for the next part!
Makes me think of Carmen's "The Champion". A boxing match between Christ & Satan. In the final round Christ drops his gloves, allowing the Devil to deliver the knockout blow. Christ lands on the mat as the Devil celebrates..., until the official begins to count down from 10, rather than up.
Your poems and stories are always so compelling in so many ways. Good job.
Oh, my! I don't know if I can keep up with this tune! But I'll try ;)
Hopefully it’s salvation! Conspiracy’s are crazy! Great work!