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The Haunting Of Car 17

Part 1: Collaboration With Mother Combs

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 10 months ago Updated 10 months ago 1 min read
The Haunting Of Car 17
Photo by Roland Lösslein on Unsplash

The car clicked and it moaned

As it rolled down the tracks

Through the rows of tombstones

Where the long bridge collapsed

Taking the lives

Of the foulest of men

Meeting their demise

About a quarter to ten

When the moon crossed the sun

And the world went black

The dark magic began

There was no turning back

And the spirits demanded

Penance for their doom

For their souls had been stranded

This old train car, their tomb

So they ravaged and terrorized

All who gathered onboard

Watching the fear in their eyes

They would not be ignored

With more power dead

Than they ever had living

No matter how much they pled

They remained unforgiving

So the train was abandoned

Off the tracks, in the woods

Every passenger demanded

It be left there for good

To air out the demons

Let them join the deceased

Release those heathens

To find eternal peace

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fact or fictionFor Funslam poetryStream of Consciousnesssurreal poetry

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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

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  • Randy Wayne Jellison-Knock10 months ago

    Hauntingly begun, Kelli.

  • Susan Fourtané 10 months ago

    I am coming from part four to read how it all began. 😊 Nice work, you two.

  • Lightning Bolt ⚡10 months ago

    I just found part four published and came back here to start. I love it!! Horror is my first love. This has death and darkness and a *train going off it's tracks*! All poetic too. I am eager to see where ladies take this. ⚡💙⚡

  • Calvin London10 months ago

    The darker side of Kelli eh!!! 😊😊😊

  • Oh wow, this was super dark! Gonna read Sharon's one now and then your part 3!

  • Mother Combs10 months ago

    This is going to be a good one <3

  • This reminded me of Stephen King's Carrie!

  • Dana Crandell10 months ago

    Interesting idea to collaborate. I like what the tewo of you came up with.

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