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The Goodbye Box

A Poem About Cherishing Memories

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 7 months ago β€’ 1 min read
Runner-Up in This Is How I Remember It Challenge
The Goodbye Box
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Give memories a proper seat ....or a glass box.

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In my Primary Five class was a boy

named Boon.

Who stored goodbyes

In a box.

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He brought it to school --

Glass --

And filled it with coloured notes

When someone left.

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We found it strange.

I laughed with others

At him

Louder than needed.

But I once asked --"Why glass?"

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"Because cardboard tears.

Forgets.

Glass recalls. Even when

it cracks."

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When our teacher died

He filled the box

So full it made

His desk

Sink.

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When Jia Le transferred schools,

He wrote "See you soon"

And sealed it -- it meant something

to him.

He wanted to recall people

And their steps.

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Their voices.

Their hugs.

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But one day,

He left too.

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No box.

No note

Just his empty seat

And blank coloured paper.

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Time went on.

My father passed.

I stood by his bed

With a swallowed goodbye.

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Then I thought of Boon

And how he gave Sorrow

A proper seat

The way we do

For people.

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He wasn't odd.

He just knew what it meant

To remember.

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Original poem by Michelle Liew. AI tags are coincidental.

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • A. J. Schoenfeld4 months ago

    This story has been stolen by another creator. It appears he has reposted a bunch of Top Stories as his own. Judey Kalchik noticed one of mine and reported it. I have reported his theft of this story as well. https://shopping-feedback.today/poets/the-goodbye-box-o025av06tj%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! πŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠπŸŽ‰πŸ’–πŸŽŠ

  • Sean A.4 months ago

    Congratulations!

  • This is so beautiful. Your win is so well deserved. This piece is beautiful ❀️

  • Raymond G. Taylor4 months ago

    And back to say congratulations for your win in the challenge

  • Congrats on your Top Story. Well deserved

  • Raymond G. Taylor6 months ago

    Brought a tear to my eye

  • A. J. Schoenfeld6 months ago

    This was wonderful and thought provoking.

  • Caroline Craven7 months ago

    Oh gosh - this was so sad. Great writing.

  • king pokhtoon7 months ago

    please seen my story

  • Congrats on your Top Story, very well done!

  • Mahmood Afridi7 months ago

    Congratulations πŸŽ‰πŸ‘

  • A delightful poem about the importance of memories, especially of loved ones.

  • Tiffany Gordon7 months ago

    Beautiful Beautiful work Michelle! Sorry to hear about your father...

  • L.I.E7 months ago

    Awww such a beautiful message. Memories are important.

  • Lana V Lynx7 months ago

    Such a beautiful poem, Michelle. Glass box for memories - such a cool concept.

  • Sean A.7 months ago

    Beautiful poem! The idea of the box is so comforting and sad at the same time. Makes me wonder how many goodbyes until it’s too full to close?

  • Very well written, congrats πŸ‘

  • Mariann Carroll7 months ago

    I love the message in this poem πŸ’›

  • Sandy Gillman7 months ago

    A glass box is a perfect metaphor for holding onto a memory.

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