The Goodbye Box
A Poem About Cherishing Memories
Give memories a proper seat ....or a glass box.
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In my Primary Five class was a boy
named Boon.
Who stored goodbyes
In a box.
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He brought it to school --
Glass --
And filled it with coloured notes
When someone left.
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We found it strange.
I laughed with others
At him
Louder than needed.
But I once asked --"Why glass?"
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"Because cardboard tears.
Forgets.
Glass recalls. Even when
it cracks."
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When our teacher died
He filled the box
So full it made
His desk
Sink.
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When Jia Le transferred schools,
He wrote "See you soon"
And sealed it -- it meant something
to him.
He wanted to recall people
And their steps.
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Their voices.
Their hugs.
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But one day,
He left too.
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No box.
No note
Just his empty seat
And blank coloured paper.
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Time went on.
My father passed.
I stood by his bed
With a swallowed goodbye.
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Then I thought of Boon
And how he gave Sorrow
A proper seat
The way we do
For people.
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He wasn't odd.
He just knew what it meant
To remember.
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Original poem by Michelle Liew. AI tags are coincidental.
About the Creator
Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin
Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.



Comments (21)
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Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! ππππππ
Congratulations!
This is so beautiful. Your win is so well deserved. This piece is beautiful β€οΈ
And back to say congratulations for your win in the challenge
Congrats on your Top Story. Well deserved
Brought a tear to my eye
This was wonderful and thought provoking.
great poem. please support i am new.
Oh gosh - this was so sad. Great writing.
please seen my story
Congrats on your Top Story, very well done!
Congratulations ππ
A delightful poem about the importance of memories, especially of loved ones.
Beautiful Beautiful work Michelle! Sorry to hear about your father...
Awww such a beautiful message. Memories are important.
Such a beautiful poem, Michelle. Glass box for memories - such a cool concept.
Beautiful poem! The idea of the box is so comforting and sad at the same time. Makes me wonder how many goodbyes until itβs too full to close?
Very well written, congrats π
I love the message in this poem π
A glass box is a perfect metaphor for holding onto a memory.