The Good and Bad of it all
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I saw rain pour from the sun-
And stop mid air-
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A tree ran away from its' root-
As a leaf rode the wave of the rain-
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I shut an eye-
Then flip to the next eye-
To test them both-
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In that time-
Fire swam on the back of a fish-
And the ash made soil of the new sea-
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I turn my head-
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The sun is dry and warm-
A bird does a soar song-
The wind sets an easy sail-
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The calm and the wild-
Do a push and pull two step-
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A duel-
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Ugly, for it is raw-
Silk, for it is soft-
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Set to stun-
As the moon does the sky-
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Made to hold the good and bad of it all
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A Dart at Dusk
Seconds ago, the sullen sun set on the two of us… my exuberant furry companion and me. A fresh breeze embraces us, delivering welcome relief from the day’s oppressive heat. His typical stumbling and staggering along — apace with a sloth — has turned into trip-trapping, high-stepping, almost skipping along.
By Angie the Archivist 📚🪶3 days ago in Petlife
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Brilliant use of imageries! Loved your poem! Congratulations on your Top Story! I've subscribed to you!
I loved this. So clever and so many great lines. Congrats on the Top Story.
nice
This is very nice. Congrats on the TS.
Congrats on your top story! ❤️
I feel like this capture the Monday feeling
And that, is exactly how I feel today. Congrats on the top story. I have happily subscribed
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Excellent performance! Congratulations on your Top Story
Adept writing and beautiful imagery! A wonder in a singular prose 💕 congratulations 🎉 on your wonderful top story!
Awesome ✨ and Congratulations on your Top Story💯🎉
Very creative and skilfully written. Congratulations!
Nice one 🥰
This is gorgeous, absolutely wonderful work. Congratulations on the Top Story! I won’t be surprised to see this place in the challenge too ❤️
Wow, this was phenomenal. Congrats on your well-deserved Top Story. You've earned a new subscriber, and I'm looking forward to reading more of your work
Congratulations on Top Story! 🥳👏🥳
Creative & impressive!!!♥️♥️💕
st6p. is that a new thing🤔
The sillyness within the words make the poem very endearing. This is truly unique and a fun read. I love it.
Jada, your poem is awesome! Question: Why is there a "6" in "st6p"?