The Glow Beneath the Ruin
A Prose Poem on Becoming New When the Fire Ends

I watch the final curl of flame shiver above the wood as if reluctant to surrender its trembling life. The fire has eaten all I once believed immovable leaving a hollowed shape that speaks softly with the hush of falling soot. In this dimming glow I sense the outline of my former self-rising only to sink again into the cradle of ash. It is a stillness heavy as thunder holding the last breath of all that has ended.
Heat lingers where brightness has fled drifting through the remnants like a fading vow. It presses upon me with a raw insistence reminding me of every fractured promise every dream that collapsed beneath its own weight. The burning was merciless, yet I yielded to it for I knew the flame consumes only what cannot endure.
From the blackened remnants a faint stirring begins. It is small subtle nearly mistaken for smoke. But it rises with a pulse steady and solemn shaped by the silence that follows ruin. I feel it gathering within the ashes of my thoughts finding strength in what has fallen away.
When the final spark folds into darkness a new self is born not in brilliance but in patient ascent. The night receives me, and I rise from the embers changed.
About the Creator
Tim Carmichael
Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.


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