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The Flower Girl

Pondering on the death -- and life -- of a dream

By Holly PheniPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 3 min read
The Flower Girl
Photo by Anna Niezabitowska on Unsplash

As we head into the new year, some of you are likely standing at a funeral for your dreams. Last year didn't bring the success or the progress you had hoped. In fact, it brought great loss. You don't feel like a "new you" just because the clocked ticked past midnight. This story is for you.

I've been there. Wow have I been there, and I wanted to share this with you: The seeds you planted were not in vain. Keep on the rocky dirt path a little longer and you will see it blossom into a beautiful way forward.

The Flower Girl

There once was a girl who loved to grow flowers,

She’d sit and she’d sing in her garden for hours.

Her plants grew in beauty, with great love and care,

They brought her such joy that she wanted to share.

So into her wagon went violets and roses,

Forget-me-nots, peonies, lilies, and posies.

The wagon bump-skipped down the dirt road to town,

“We’ll give away smiles and chase away frowns.”

It didn’t take long before someone passed through.

“Would you like some flowers? They’re my gift to you.”

She handed him roses, all bursting with pride,

But to her dismay, he just cast them aside.

“These roses have thorns, and their color is dull.”

And he gave them a stomp, splitting petals from hull.

The girl felt a pang, but she straightened and said,

“Someone else will like them, let’s just move ahead.”

A woman came by, and she asked for some lilies.

“These don’t smell at all!” down they went, willy-nilly.

The little girl cringed as the flowerpot shattered.

The lilies were mush, and her dreams lay there, scattered.

She picked up the pieces so no one would fall,

Then pressed on and said, “I’ll find homes for you all.”

A third passer-by said the mums were a gaff.

Soon more flowers fell to the well-trodden path.

This went on and on, as the girl persevered.

Not one person smiled, not one heart was cheered.

With bitter complaints they all mocked her dear flowers,

And all were thrown down in a matter of hours.

Her treasures lay dead, and her tender heart pained,

She sat in the dirt and her tears fell like rain.

Along came a friend and the friend said, “Take heed –

“Those flowers aren’t wasted -- each one has a seed.

“Your tears gave them water, the sun shines above,

“The whole path will bloom like a rainbow of love.”

Given some time, up grew bright second chances,

Soon blooms, bees, butterflies and children had dances.

They renamed the dirt road the “Beautiful Way.”

The seeds made a garden that blooms to this day.

And where are the naysayers? Who now complains?

From the death of a dream came such valuable gains.

What is the lesson in this little tale?

Keep trying, even if it seems like a fail.

Keep giving, although some will cast it aside.

Love always comes back like the deep ocean’s tide.

Some things take time, as the flowers bestowed.

Seeds planted with tears can still bloom down the road.

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Keep dreaming this year. Don't let the naysayers or critics have the final say. Keep learning, keep watering your seeds and keep shining your beautiful light. If you can still dream, you have a seed planted already.

I hope this little story meant something to you all. It came to me one night and I think it was a gift to encourage my own heart, so like the flower girl I'm sharing what I have.

If you feel like sharing, comment below about your big dream. Here's a song that I find inspiring to keep pushing forward:

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About the Creator

Holly Pheni

This page is for dreamchasing, adventure, and catharsis. Hope my musings connect with others out there.

Blog: flyingelephantmom.com

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  • Pōlani Monderen 3 years ago

    Firm believer in this truth! Great rhythm, can feel the emotion and just how convincing this night of reflection must have been for you

  • P. K. Gani3 years ago

    Such a lovely message for the new year.

  • Lamar Wiggins3 years ago

    Wow! Great message! "Seeds planted with tears can still bloom down the road" Was a powerful line for me. Thanks for creating this and sharing it.

  • Thank you for sharing this❤️🥰💯👍🌹Im Glad I read this and received the message 💬 🙏😉

  • I'm not much of a goals kinda person but whoaaaa the tale of the Flower Girl moved me. I loved the morals it portrayed which are "Look at the bright side of things" and "Everything happens for a reason". Loved your poem very much!

  • Tiffany Gordon3 years ago

    This touched my heart! It felt like a gift from above! What a lovely piece! Thanks 4 sharing! Happi 2023 Holly!!!! 😊

  • Absolutely beautiful and inspiring. The opening, "some of you are likely standing at a funeral for your dreams.", hits hard!

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Oh my goodness. This is gorgeous. Well done.

  • Kelly Robertson3 years ago

    Thank you for sharing this! It's so beautiful and encouraging. Excellent work!

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