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The First Year

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By Rowan Finley Published 2 years ago 1 min read
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Leave and cleave, don’t stay

too close to your parents please.

You need to be one.

Haiku

About the Creator

Rowan Finley

Father. Academic Advisor. Musician. Writer. My real name is Jesse Balogh.

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  • Komal10 months ago

    That “leave and cleave” hits hard! This should be on a tea towel or something...

  • Colleen Walters2 years ago

    A lot of truth to this

  • Shirley Belk2 years ago

    Great advice!!

  • Yay, the first year is Lol!!!

  • Lol, that's sage advice. Loved your Haiku!

  • John Cox2 years ago

    Loved Nagoh’s response. I believe this is the most sensual Haiku I have ever read. Well done, Rowan!

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