
On the first day,
They were all hushed and cautious,
Constructing a fresh realm from the ruins,
Left behind by past transgressions,
Rationalised by their own timidity,
Paralysed by inability to decide,
Across the divide.
I found solace in creating a new vision,
A vision of a life worth living,
Even though all the forces seemed to conspire against me.
Amidst a whirlwind of anxiety,
Feeling crippled and exhausted,
Courage and confidence are fading,
Lost in the depths of oblivion.
Has luck abandoned me or never existed?
Who will remember in a year's time?
Battered and bruised, my nerves
Refuse to carry on once more
“Align your body and soul
For the lurking challenges ahead
Shift the fortune
From good to bad and back!”
I suppose that's how
Reversal operates
Behind my back
Damn!
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Thank you for reading!
About the Creator
Moon Desert
UK-based
BA in Cultural Studies
Crime Fiction: Love
Poetry: Friend
Psychology: Salvation
Where the wild roses grow full of words...
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