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the fickle eye

or how colour meets the mind

By Gillian vRPublished 5 years ago 1 min read

if it's too loud

screams like hot pyrotechnic

flamboyant thigh stuffed neon lycra

a taught jazzercise tangerine technique

the eye discounts a sight that excites

as too synthetic, improbable

sees instead as natural the duller hues of manufacture

if it's too common

casino flicker slots beckoning

a bold yellow slap plastered on unseemly concrete

what danger warning once was becomes

ubiquitous, the mind trains not to see

finger scroll conditioning

the golden yellow tape proclaming

"do not cross"

what if our true nature was

the toucan crowning flash

vermillion macaw plume

rose prismatic sun refractions

amethyst sky enfolded, colour bent only in time

the mallard's mandarin plume

golden lilac anemone, if plastic blurred

witnessed through a snorkel, some forever Sunday afternoon

nature poetry

About the Creator

Gillian vR

Bi white lady

Crafter of words since 1994

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