A Hymn for Love Drunk on Sin
Velvet Damnation
Love prowls alleys of spirit,
perfumed venom sweetens wounds.
Lips trade vows like contraband,
kisses scorch faith to ash.
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Desire reigns tyrant-angel,
halo smeared by pleasure.
Prayer dissolves on tongues,
sin sings lullabies.
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Beloved arrives crowned by ruin,
smile bright as sacrilege.
Promises drip honeyed rust,
time rots roses of devotion.
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Jealousy sharpens silver moons,
hope staggers drunk on perfume.
Spleen laughs beneath silk nights,
virtue sleeps with open eyes.
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Love blesses knives of longing,
pain tastes holy-sweet.
Bliss burns slow, exquisite,
soul kneels gladly, damned.
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Tim Carmichael
Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Beautiful and Brutal Things, his latest book.
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Stunning work Tim!
Ooh, this is delicious, my favorite flavor of wickedness.