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The Fallen Star

Fallen but nowhere to be found

By Marie381Uk Published 4 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

The Fallen Star

I saw a star fall behind the hills,

it cracked the night with silver light,

its edges bent like old promises,

I tried to catch it but my hands were empty.

The wind carried whispers I could not hold,

and the darkness smelled of cold stone,

I watched the sky swallow what I desired,

while my chest throbbed with quiet longing.

I traced its path through the trembling clouds,

the echoes of fire scattered on my tongue,

I felt a grief that had no name,

yet the night seemed unwilling to end.

Every shadow pressed against my shoulders,

every tree leaned toward the ground in fear,

I wanted to reach the place it fell,

to lay my palm against the lost light.

I thought of wishes that never came true,

of hands that trembled, alone in the dark,

the star burned brighter in memory’s eye,

and still I waited for its return.

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Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Graham4 months ago

    I hope your wish did come true somehow. Good job.

  • Darla M Seely4 months ago

    Beautiful

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