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The Eternal Nap

A fellow lay down for a rest,

By Dabasish PalPublished about a year ago 1 min read
The Eternal Nap
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A fellow lay down for a rest,

In a coffin, he thought he was blessed.

But then with a yawn,

He woke up at dawn,

In a cloud-bed that felt second best.

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About the Creator

Dabasish Pal

Hey there, story lovers! I'm Dabasish Pal, and I write the kind of stories that keep you up way past your bedtime ( don't worry, I've been there too!). Get ready for some twist, turns and maybe even few feels.

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  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    Fantastic

  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    Fabulously clever and cute!

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    Well done.

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