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The Pearly Gate Mix-Up

There was once a soul in a queue,

By Dabasish PalPublished about a year ago 1 min read
The Pearly Gate Mix-Up
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There was once a soul in a queue,

At the gates with a shimmering view.

Saint Peter looked down,

And then with a frown,

Said, "Wait, you're not due until two!"

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Dabasish Pal

Hey there, story lovers! I'm Dabasish Pal, and I write the kind of stories that keep you up way past your bedtime ( don't worry, I've been there too!). Get ready for some twist, turns and maybe even few feels.

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  • Andrea Corwin about a year ago

    hahaha - fun to make fun like this!

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout a year ago

    Well said.

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