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The End

there was a time...

By BrenPublished 3 years ago 1 min read

the lights are growing dim

i am cold and i’m afraid

my life is leaking slowly

from the holes that i have made;

this is my end

the veins that i have chosen

will never ever mend

nothing in the distance

the beginning of the end;

this is my end

past the point of no return

i am scared i cannot lie

in fearful awe of what lies beyond

but not afraid to die;

this is my end

in the overwhelming darkness

my existence starts to fade

freed from life by selfish spite

and a rusty razor blade;

this is my end

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Bren

"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa

"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend

Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler

I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!

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  • Moon Desert3 years ago

    A suicidal note? This piece is piercing through me like the most familiar feeling. I’ve been there many times and when the time comes, she’ll probably be my best friend waiting for me for all those years until my time here is done. It’s soothing knowing that this time will eventually come for everyone.

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