
the lights are growing dim
i am cold and i’m afraid
my life is leaking slowly
from the holes that i have made;
this is my end
the veins that i have chosen
will never ever mend
nothing in the distance
the beginning of the end;
this is my end
past the point of no return
i am scared i cannot lie
in fearful awe of what lies beyond
but not afraid to die;
this is my end
in the overwhelming darkness
my existence starts to fade
freed from life by selfish spite
and a rusty razor blade;
this is my end
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
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A suicidal note? This piece is piercing through me like the most familiar feeling. I’ve been there many times and when the time comes, she’ll probably be my best friend waiting for me for all those years until my time here is done. It’s soothing knowing that this time will eventually come for everyone.