The Eaters Beneath
Voices That Gnaw, Whispers That Feast

I heard them first within the drain,
A chittering choir, slick with hate.
They whispered truths that oozed like rain,
And dripped behind my eyes too late.
—
My skull became a hollow nest,
Where writhing voices laid their young.
Their claws grew deep inside my chest,
Their tongues were hot, their breath was dung.
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They scraped their names against my brain,
Carved letters deep into the bone.
Each syllable, a burning chain—
Each thought I had was not my own.
—
I dug my fingers past my scalp,
And felt them squirm beneath the skin.
They laughed, they laughed—a wet, black gulp,
Their feeding frenzy set within.
—
I clawed my face, I cracked my jaw,
I split the sockets, spilled my sight.
Yet still they sang, they still they gnawed,
And called my hollow corpse their light.
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Now here I sit, my husk their throne,
A puppet, slack with chewing holes.
No thoughts remain—they’re not my own—
The eaters feast upon my soul.
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That image is frightening and the words sent chills up and down my spine. Good job.
I-Read this twice it should be Top Story 👌✍️🙏