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The Eaters Beneath

Voices That Gnaw, Whispers That Feast

By Jason “Jay” BenskinPublished 11 months ago 1 min read

I heard them first within the drain,

A chittering choir, slick with hate.

They whispered truths that oozed like rain,

And dripped behind my eyes too late.

My skull became a hollow nest,

Where writhing voices laid their young.

Their claws grew deep inside my chest,

Their tongues were hot, their breath was dung.

They scraped their names against my brain,

Carved letters deep into the bone.

Each syllable, a burning chain—

Each thought I had was not my own.

I dug my fingers past my scalp,

And felt them squirm beneath the skin.

They laughed, they laughed—a wet, black gulp,

Their feeding frenzy set within.

I clawed my face, I cracked my jaw,

I split the sockets, spilled my sight.

Yet still they sang, they still they gnawed,

And called my hollow corpse their light.

Now here I sit, my husk their throne,

A puppet, slack with chewing holes.

No thoughts remain—they’re not my own—

The eaters feast upon my soul.

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Jason “Jay” Benskin

Crafting authored passion in fiction, horror fiction, and poems.

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  • Mark Graham11 months ago

    That image is frightening and the words sent chills up and down my spine. Good job.

  • Marie381Uk 11 months ago

    I-Read this twice it should be Top Story 👌✍️🙏

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