
Last night I was in the desert (with Prometheus, I must assume), and he was tied by some inscrutable means to a jagged peak of desert stone thrust up like an offending, throbbing piece of cartilage; from betwixt the legs of an angry God.

And below,
in the desert sands,
we hefted jagged spears of finely sharpened wood
like vampire stakes upward
...and pierced
his flesh like a Hanging Saint
before the Tribunal of a Roman Prelate

And somewhere
down the road
a man at the bar
with a cracked mug and a bad attitude
sees his hand fly up and I know
...this is a Hollywood set because
the director is someone whose name is a byword for fame (and he's playing this role)
and then I'm wandering around downstairs in a filthy set of basement rooms beneath some sort of hospital lab when two whores come in and one of them pulls down her panties over long sleek legs and I say "she has a great ass" and then we lie down and I thrust my tongue between her teeth as she smiles and all the while

I am opening a box that I think is a pet and it's a highly-lacquered piece of wood
--with ornate carvings and there are animals wandering around down here
in a subbasement room (which must be a zoo) and one of them is the most massive eagle I have ever seen

and he's thrusting his beak into the box I call baby
and I wonder: how I'm going to get around him without him taking a chunk out of my ass?
--this is only one night alone and I wake up and say to myself god man that was some silly dream...
But what about the Eagle and the wooden box?
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Tom Baker
Author of Haunted Indianapolis, Indiana Ghost Folklore, Midwest Maniacs, Midwest UFOs and Beyond, Scary Urban Legends, 50 Famous Fables and Folk Tales, and Notorious Crimes of the Upper Midwest.: http://tombakerbooks.weebly.com
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Comments (8)
This has totally inspired a story in my head. What a ride this was. Crazy and crazy good/great.
Quite the adventure. Wel done!
I also wonder about the Eagle and the box. Thanks for taking me on this strange ride. I loved it.
Nice work in surreal wisdom. Happy to subscribe to your work.
Wow, pulled me in and kept me reading. You now have a new subscriber
Just when I thought my dreams were off the hook!
I've never seen such a surreal dream painted in such vivid colours. Kinda makes me want to record my dreams. Beautifully done!
Heyyy! Who said you could write about my dreams? Loved it. Just awesome.