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The Drowning Bed

Sleep Tight. Sink Deep. Never Wake.

By Jason “Jay” BenskinPublished 11 months ago 1 min read
The Drowning Bed
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It sloshes when no one moves.

It breathes when no one should.

It waits.

The mattress shifts beneath your weight,

A sluggish pulse, a thing that waits.

The salesman smiled, his fingers pruned—

How long, you wonder, had he been consumed?

The first night’s still, the water cold,

A dreamless dark that takes ahold.

But as you sink in midnight’s clutch,

Something beneath begins to touch.

Not a ripple.

Not a wave.

A hand.

It drags like seaweed, slick and thin,

With fingers boneless, stretched like skin.

They trace your spine, they stroke your side,

They find your throat, they slip inside.

The water thickens, dense as rot,

A syrup flow, a stomach’s clot.

You twist, you writhe, but it won’t break,

The bed’s awake. The bed’s awake.

The mattress bulges, something climbs,

A swollen shape with empty eyes.

Its lips unhinge, its jaw unseams,

And gulps your air like stolen dreams.

You wake—or think you do—gasping loud,

But the bed still churns, the bed still drowns.

A leeching weight, a tethered throat,

A night where bodies bloat and float.

And when they find you days too late,

The coroner will hesitate.

For lungs aren’t meant to hold the tide,

And yet—your corpse is full inside.

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Jason “Jay” Benskin

Crafting authored passion in fiction, horror fiction, and poems.

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  • L.I.E11 months ago

    Okay this was kind of creepy, but excellent writing.

  • The Dani Writer11 months ago

    This looks really well written! But it's super late and I'm a horror-phobe scaredycat (ask Dharrsheena,) so I stopped midway as a preventative measure...my imagination would run amok. The lines I saw...expert-levels!

  • Tiffany Gordon11 months ago

    Brilliant writing!

  • Mariana Busarova11 months ago

    Great flow! Wonderful poem.

  • Komal11 months ago

    Oh, this is deliciously eerie! That creeping, suffocating dread builds so well, and that last line? Chef’s kiss. Never trusting a mattress again.

  • Mother Combs11 months ago

    Oh, my, stories like this is the reason I had a hard time sleeping as a teen, lol! I absolutely love this! Creepy good!

  • JBaz11 months ago

    You are the king of creep. I don’t know what else to say about this. 👏👏

  • Mark Graham11 months ago

    This is way to freaky and what a imagination you have to have to produce this one. Great job.

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