The Drowning Bed
Sleep Tight. Sink Deep. Never Wake.
It sloshes when no one moves.
It breathes when no one should.
It waits.
—
The mattress shifts beneath your weight,
A sluggish pulse, a thing that waits.
The salesman smiled, his fingers pruned—
How long, you wonder, had he been consumed?
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The first night’s still, the water cold,
A dreamless dark that takes ahold.
But as you sink in midnight’s clutch,
Something beneath begins to touch.
—
Not a ripple.
Not a wave.
A hand.
—
It drags like seaweed, slick and thin,
With fingers boneless, stretched like skin.
They trace your spine, they stroke your side,
They find your throat, they slip inside.
—
The water thickens, dense as rot,
A syrup flow, a stomach’s clot.
You twist, you writhe, but it won’t break,
The bed’s awake. The bed’s awake.
—
The mattress bulges, something climbs,
A swollen shape with empty eyes.
Its lips unhinge, its jaw unseams,
And gulps your air like stolen dreams.
—
You wake—or think you do—gasping loud,
But the bed still churns, the bed still drowns.
A leeching weight, a tethered throat,
A night where bodies bloat and float.
—
And when they find you days too late,
The coroner will hesitate.
For lungs aren’t meant to hold the tide,
And yet—your corpse is full inside.
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Comments (8)
Okay this was kind of creepy, but excellent writing.
This looks really well written! But it's super late and I'm a horror-phobe scaredycat (ask Dharrsheena,) so I stopped midway as a preventative measure...my imagination would run amok. The lines I saw...expert-levels!
Brilliant writing!
Great flow! Wonderful poem.
Oh, this is deliciously eerie! That creeping, suffocating dread builds so well, and that last line? Chef’s kiss. Never trusting a mattress again.
Oh, my, stories like this is the reason I had a hard time sleeping as a teen, lol! I absolutely love this! Creepy good!
You are the king of creep. I don’t know what else to say about this. 👏👏
This is way to freaky and what a imagination you have to have to produce this one. Great job.