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The Distant Dawn

"It's only a passing thing, this shadow."

By Roderick MakimPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
The Distant Dawn
Photo by Jakob Owens on Unsplash

If progress is not

Linear lined forever

Upwards -

Neither is descent

Determined

Forever.

Life is not

Destined to darken

Forever

Whatever light

Lingers in this last

Moment

Before the dark

Will still be

Here

Again

With the distant dawn.

Even

If we are not,

It will

Be here.

Descendants of

Present descent

Will feel the light of

Progress

We cannot even

Imagine.

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About the Creator

Roderick Makim

Read one too many adventure stories as a child and decided I'd make that my life.

I grew up on a cattle station in the Australian Outback and decided to spend the rest of my life seeing the rest of the world.

For more: www.roderickmakim.com

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