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Dumb evolution

There are so many fucking awful things going on in the world at the moment, and one of the things that really does my head in is how incredibly stupid so much of it is. Anyway, today's little poem is about that I guess.

By Roderick MakimPublished 7 months ago 1 min read

War-sharpened tusks

Curling back

Into the skull of society -

Flesh-eating larvae

Burrowing into

Online eyes, can you see

This ugly stupidity

This dumb cruelty of

Chance of

Change unthought

Charging backwards

Towards an evolution

Nobody could see

Coming?

_

A misstep, stumbling

Downward the crumbling

Ladder of millennia.

_

Pantomime blood-thirst

Rehearsed and rehearsed

Until its real

Bursts free from

Prison-minds.

_

Missing links cheer

For the return of their chains

As long as the ones they

Hate

Are chained first.

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About the Creator

Roderick Makim

Read one too many adventure stories as a child and decided I'd make that my life.

I grew up on a cattle station in the Australian Outback and decided to spend the rest of my life seeing the rest of the world.

For more: www.roderickmakim.com

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran7 months ago

    That last stanza was especially my favourite. Loved your poem!

  • Ahnaf Fardin Khan7 months ago

    Well written.Hey I am new here please support me.

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