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The Dieters Poem

Wish it worked for me ha ha

By Marie381Uk Published 12 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

The Dieters Poem

There once was a woman feeling blue,

Her clothes felt tight, what could she do?

Each diet she tried, a hopeful new start,

Yet still her weight tore her apart.

She counted the carbs, the fats, and the sweets,

She drank her green juice, in tiny treats.

She walked on the treadmill, she lifted weights,

But the scale just stared back, sealing her fates.

She sighed a deep sigh, a tear in her eye,

"Is this my life now? Just eating and fat, oh why

Then a wise little voice, from somewhere inside,

Said, Love your own body, confidence will guide!

So she looked in the mirror, and what did she see?

A beautiful woman, healthy and free!

She danced and she laughed, she was at ease

The joy in her heart made so many happier days.

The numbers on the scale, they mattered no more,

She focused on health, from her head to her core.

She ate nourishing foods, that made her feel great,

And her happiness blossomed, sealing her fate...

Of a life filled with joy, and love, and good cheer,

And the size of her jeans, no longer a fear!

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Pure Crown12 months ago

    Interest

  • Marvelous Michael12 months ago

    Oh darling this is so relatable. Body issues is a big issue in our world today. Sending you love and hugs

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