The Defilement
A Stream of Consciousness Poem

Why didn't they see it coming?
The signs of rot and corruption were vivid, unmistakable
Who could possibly have been oblivious to the steady slide south?
The lying, the cheating, the betrayal of ancient and noble codes
The monstrous, unslakable thirst for power, not as a means
But as the only, absolute and final end
The grotesquely ostentatious, sweaty, grasping greed
The sale of innocence on the open, stinking market
The abject worship of tools and the rape and murder of craft
Music made by algorithms
Dancers too exhausted and sick and frightened to move
Rule by idiots and devils who scream about fairness and meritocracy
Education that is sterile or a flimsy mask for indoctrination
Doctors waving for aid in an avalanche of poor, afflicted bodies
Or swimming in outrageous luxury in a sunny boutique, treating queens
Homes grown rusty and leaking and so riddled with vermin
That the tenants feel like the scurrying invaders rather than the natives
Or so echoingly hollow and pristine
That they resemble the corpses of pastel giants
Gladiatorial mayhem beamed into the rancid refuges of the unwashed
While libraries become public toilets and cinemas go blind
Why didn't they see it coming?
Consider carefully
The premise of your question may be faulty:
Perhaps they did see it coming
And liked what they saw
There is something morbidly hypnotic about watching
The pale green logic of mold eating the slice
Charting the progress of those stubborn, pioneering spores
From the shore of the crust into the fresh, moist interior
So faint, so careful, so tentatively creeping, at first
As long as our slice is still edible, what do the others matter?
It's a shame what happened to the sourdough, but the baguettes
They are as toothsome and robust and warm
As our most delicious, naughty dreams
Some Wednesday you awaken and discover
That not a crumb can remember life without mold
Some worship the mold, seeking to propitiate it with prayer
Sacrifices are made, festivals in its honor draw poets and artists
Operas chronicle the slow awakening of minds
To the formerly invisible but currently naked and astonishing
Sublimity of this formerly notorious adversary
Now revealed as a saint, a prophet, a heroic redeemer
Let's reboot mold!
What is bread, after all?
Why were we so attached to it?
If we are genuine critical thinkers
Shouldn't we carefully deconstruct canonical narratives
About this so-called staff of life?
I've heard some ugly rumors about yeast
We all know that gluten is a secret scourge
Whereas mold, well, we don't have to do anything
And it shows up, takes charge, and runs the show
It is strong, isn't it? Decisive, certain...authentic!
Not at all bothered by details or implications or second thoughts
What drooling idiot would try to reason with mold?
You might as well negotiate with a tumor
Or try to make a bad actor into a good king
Mold doesn't need our permission to be itself!
Corruption's a kind of perfection, don't you think?
About the Creator
D. J. Reddall
I write because my time is limited and my imagination is not.
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Comments (3)
This was extraordinary! My initial reaction to the first part was that it’s not a matter of how we didn’t see it coming, but how we don’t see it coming again and again and again. But the way, you turned it, the examples you used, the metaphors, were perfect. Leaves me chanting :TS TS TS
This is amazing.
Huh, that sure makes me think. You're definitely on to something. This was sort of eye opening!