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The Deadly Scythe

Beware of the Grim Reaper

By Janis Masyk-JacksonPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
Grim Reaper image by DeepAI in the public domain

Grim Reaper turns head

Holds piercing scythe to your throat

Slice, slice, now you're dead

Haiku

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Janis Masyk-Jackson

I published my first article when I was 10 years old and I've been writing ever since. I'm a mom to 4 grown kids and I love traveling, animals, the paranormal and I'm a huge Disney fan.

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  • Gregory Payton2 days ago

    Great haiku, although I am not in to horror. But well done Janis.

  • Aarsh Malik2 months ago

    You created a whole horror story in just three lines—that’s impressive.

  • Catsidhe2 months ago

    Lol, this is delightfully fun!

  • Raymond G. Taylor3 months ago

    Haha gotta love the Grim Reaper. Good luck with the challenge and welcome to Vocal

  • C. Rommial Butler3 months ago

    Well-wrought! I like to think of him as disarmingly polite. "Sorry about this. It's my job, you know?"

  • Sid Aaron Hirji3 months ago

    spooky and in so few words

  • Sandy Gillman3 months ago

    Brutal, quick, and oddly satisfying. It’s like the reaper himself wouldn’t waste words.

  • L.C. Schäfer3 months ago

    Oooh I like this angle 😁

  • Caitlin Charlton3 months ago

    Oh this was frightening. Especially the turning of the head. The third line. Everything happened so fast. Now I won't be able to say I am alive. This was fantastic Janis 👏🏾 👌🏾 🤗❤️🖤

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