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The Days Of Summer

Beach trip distractions we want to remember.

By Jason Ray Morton Published 3 years ago 1 min read
The Days Of Summer
Photo by Luddmyla . on Unsplash

Daringly distractive as boys stumble over their feet

Innocently, they gather at the beach to beat the heat

Swimsuits and Daisy Dukes clinging to them all

Today it's nice enough not to be chasing them in a mall

Image by Tiểu Bảo Trương from Pixabay

Rolling down the beach to the distractions of summer

All of them free from the things that make life a bummer

Catching the rays and surfing the waves

Tired after a long day and seeking what a man craves

Image by Kiều Trường from Pixabay

In search of something past the summer that matters

Only looking for something that never shatters

Never wanting those beautiful distractions of summer to end

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Jason Ray Morton

Writing has become more important as I live with cancer. It's a therapy, it's an escape, and it's a way to do something lasting that hopefully leaves an impression.

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  • Mariann Carroll3 years ago

    I enjoyed this poem, 🙂

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Wonderful piece

  • Great poem and entry to the challenge!

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Beautiful & beautifully written!!! Loved it!!!💖💖💕

  • RP3 years ago

    Nice pictures!!

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    BEAUTIFUL !!!!

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