The Day Dreamer
My first ever attempt at a Spenserian Sonnet
I danced the day away, but not alone.
I danced with creatures of beauty and ice.
Together we laughed until the moon shone,
and when they slept, I found a different vice.
My friends in the night do not play so nice.
They growl and they bite, howl and scream.
To be one of them is a sacrifice,
but there exists not a more loyal team.
Dancing with demons is not what it seems,
but for all my life, neither have been I.
I flee into my days and live in dreams,
where maybe I won't fall before I fly.
My mind houses demons of ember-glow,
while my heart yearns for angels made of snow.
About the Creator
Lizzy Rose
I am a poet, fiction/fantasy writer, as well as a cosplayer and cover singer on Tiktok, Instagram and Youtube. You can find me elsewhere at the link below!
https://linktr.ee/lizzyrose12
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Compelling and original writing
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