the day, back again
a poem
I wish I could travel by sailing ship
and roll in waves of moon-spent chaos to land
on sweet, rumored shores.
There is someone there I wish to meet,
arched across generations, though her direction
fades in dreams of the eld. She’s new and sparkling,
this someone, a woman in apparition fog,
crossing oceans of clarity and breaks. Her lands
rise up in greeting, gentle welcome, their shimmers
melting solidly. I only see her with faint familiarity,
something about the chin and perhaps the cheeks. I wonder
if we’re about thrice removed…this—not a reflection—
yet nearer in the silver hairs. At the end’s decline, into
eternity, I see her fully. A face I love, as I sense it loves me,
and has since the beginning.
But isn’t that just the way it goes?
Then, the tongue of her homeland will meet me, and my ears
will hear it plain. A gulf healed, made clear in honest fashion,
the depths of missed connection twixt. The corridors
she once traversed upon that sailing ship will be tamed
to humming harmony and the smiling of hymns. This, a shore,
uncovered by salted distance. This: my harkening home.
About the Creator
Mackenzie Davis
“When you are describing a shape, or sound, or tint, don’t state the matter plainly, but put it in a hint. And learn to look at all things with a sort of mental squint.” Lewis Carroll
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Copyright Mackenzie Davis.

Comments (10)
This was beautiful. I loved this line: "I see her fully. A face I love, as I sense it loves me." It reminded me of staring at the photo of my Great Great Grandma, the one everyone said I looked like, and feeling such a connection to a woman who died before I was ever born.
Mackenzie, you had me enthralled from "and roll in waves of moon-spent chaos to land" Stunning work; congratulations on your win!🌹
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Congratulations! I thought it would place.
Gorgeous poem, Mackenzie! Congratulations!
This poem is lovely. The first word that came to mind upon reading was wonderment. 🪄
This is good poetry. I don't know what makes good poetry, but this is some of the good kind of it.
Yes.
Take the win now. Bloody hell. Like I said to Gabe, I'm glad I put my entries in before reading yours lol. This has a haunting feel, but mythic, old world serenity. It felt like it should have been found on parchment. Loved this a lot Mackenzie lass.
This is such a lovely, haunting piece. I really enjoyed it.