Poets logo

The Clockmaker’s Time Wasn’t Right

The day he died they fixed them selves

By Marie381Uk Published 10 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

The Clockmaker’s Time Wasn’t Right

The gears turned slow, the hands stood still,

a craftsman bent to time’s cruel will.

With careful touch, he shaped the past,

but every tick would never last.

His workshop hummed with silent dread,

a thousand clocks, yet all were dead.

He wound them tight, he set them true,

but fate had stitched his hours askew.

The pendulum swayed, yet mocked his plight,

for the clockmaker’s time was never right.

No matter how he spun the gears,

he chased lost seconds, stolen years.

His fingers ached, his vision blurred,

the ticking ghosts remained unheard.

He built the hours, he carved the days,

but time still slipped through unseen ways.

And when his breath fell still one night,

his clocks all chimed his time was right.

They ticked forever and a day

when he died he chased the evil away.

fact or fictionFamilyFree Verseinspirationalperformance poetryRequest Feedbacksad poetry

About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

Reader insights

Be the first to share your insights about this piece.

How does it work?

Add your insights

Comments (7)

Sign in to comment
  • Dhanush K10 months ago

    Thanks for sharing this gem💎

  • Calvin London10 months ago

    Nice job, Marie. Your poem dances along quite nicely as it tells the story.

  • Mark Graham10 months ago

    Clocks sure do tell of changing times. Good job.

  • Ellie Hoovs10 months ago

    a thousand clocks, yet all were dead. he chased lost seconds, stolen years time still slipped through unseen ways Powerful! The poem weaves together perfectly the rat race of life and forever chasing time - time lost, time we fear we'll never have, never time enough, time we spent doing things we shouldn't. An overarching theme of regret weighs heavy through the very last lines as the main character of the poems breath is stilled.

  • Andrea Corwin 10 months ago

    Wow, this is fascinating! I liked this line a lot: the ticking ghosts remained unheard. Well done.

  • Fabulous 😊👏

  • Nice work Maria. I really enjoyed this story. Keep up the good work.

Find us on social media

Miscellaneous links

  • Explore
  • Contact
  • Privacy Policy
  • Terms of Use
  • Support

© 2026 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.