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The Chuckling Gloom

An Ekphrastic Sonnet

By D. J. ReddallPublished about a year ago 1 min read
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The grey gloom chuckles at our cunning plans

I find the stick rather condescending;

If each crucial station, some soldier mans

Our febrile worrying may be ending!

But Horace always thinks he knows better

He thinks he can read mud like poetry

He treats me like a delinquent debtor

Who owes him meek, shuffling fealty

Damn him, taking the hill was my idea!

All of us are sick of this ugly trench

It could be that our bloody omega

Awaits above, and that makes my jaw clench

But one thing I believe I know quite well:

Horace’s stick will quickly burn in Hell!

Ekphrastic

About the Creator

D. J. Reddall

I write because my time is limited and my imagination is not.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a year ago

    Febrile, that was a new word for me! Loved your poem!

  • Kodahabout a year ago

    A lot of emotional tension! Incredibly done! 💌

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Oh wow. That was really well done. Burn Horace, burn.

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