The Chase of Shadows
Or The Reckoning of What Flees and What Stays

Upon the rolling plateau of thought my eyes hunt
where shapes move and vanish from my reach
and every step shakes with hope and fear
The wind carries a scent I almost touch
then slips away before it touches me
Fleeting as the bright glimmer along the river's spine
desire leaps and turns upon itself
as if laughing at the mind that dares follow
I speak to it with the silence of longing
and the reply comes twisted and strange
like brambles curling beneath my body
Here the heart grows heavy with watchfulness
each beat a pulse of fear and courage
and every shadow holds a kingdom I cannot visit
Sometimes the prize falls into my hands
shaking and warm and more real than I imagined
Other times it drifts away
a promise curling into the night
leaving a hollow bright with aching
an ache that teaches me patience and determination
Oh, the chase changes the hunter
into someone fierce and tender
both lost and pursuing
for the thing we chase shapes the soul
as sharply as the sword or pen
I have reached for mirages sparkling with hope
and I have stumbled into rooms of truth
where absence sparkle like diamonds in the dark
The world is indifferent. Only the wind
moving through the galleries of longing and regret
Yet each breath drawn in the stretch of pursuit
fills the limbs with strength
sharpens the eyes to the subtle dance of possibility
and the heart learns in beating
that the value lies not only in holding the prize
but in reaching, stretching, daring
for the world rewards the boldness of the hunter
Here in endless pursuit
the soul finds the wide reach of what could be
and every escape of the sought
shines with its own gentle treasure
About the Creator
Tim Carmichael
Tim is an Appalachian poet and cookbook author. He writes about rural life, family, and the places he grew up around. His poetry and essays have appeared in Bloodroot and Coal Dust, his latest book.
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Comments (3)
Clever & very beautiful! Go Tim! 💪🏾
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL WRITTEN FROM THE SOUL!
Once again, I few like you’re fighting yourself in these challenges. Very well done!