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The Camera Clicked

at the altar of Our All

By Denise DavisPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
The Camera Clicked
Photo by Hunter Moranville on Unsplash

The camera clicked,

capturing us

- silhouettes in candlelight -

at the altar of our church,

of our God.

Confident, we vowed

union until death,

not knowing

how soon

death comes

when love is lived.

Our embrace

- so intensely tight -

was forced to loosen

to accept its gifts,

its burdens of

its passion.

That life created

challenged identity, as it

demanded response, and

questioned belief

until - no longer - we were the ones

captured at that altar.

Dead, we’ve risen and roamed

beyond boundaries

our God was said to have set.

Free, we discover

self long shadowed.

New life stirs within.

With passion we embrace,

our gifts, our burdens,

of self, of love,

knowing too well

how soon

death comes.

The camera clicks,

I capture you

- in bright sunlight -

at the altar

of Our All.

love poems

About the Creator

Denise Davis

A Manhattan-toasted, Kentucky marinated, Southern Californian, this 60+ year old woman has studied writing, taught writing and admired writing. It's time to actually begin writing. We shall see how this goes.

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  • Alex H Mittelman 2 years ago

    Love it! Love your line about the dead rising!

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