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The Break-In

They took mums rings

By Marie381Uk Published 6 months ago 1 min read
By George’s Girl 2025

The Break-In

They came at night,

no warning, no sound,

just splintered wood

and footprints on the ground.

They took the telly,

they took the spare change,

a drawer of junk,

nothing strange.

But then

they found the box I’d hid

beneath her scarves,

beneath the lid

the only thing

she left to me

before she slipped

so silently.

My mother’s ring.

Her wedding gold.

Still warm with stories

never told.

She gave it me

with trembling hand,

no voice to speak,

no last command.

Now it’s gone,

those greedy thieves,

who’ll never know

how a daughter grieves.

May what they touch

turn bitter fast,

may nothing stolen

ever last.

Let their hands

feel cold at night,

let sleep desert them

out of spite.

Rest in peace Mum

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About the Creator

Marie381Uk

I've been writing poetry since the age of fourteen. With pen in hand, I wander through realms unseen. The pen holds power; ink reveals hidden thoughts. A poet may speak truth or weave a tale. You decide. Let pen and ink capture your mind❤️

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  • Mark Graham6 months ago

    How sad that had to happen. The poem is full of sadness for the loss of a heirloom and also losing the sense of safety and security of a home. Good work.

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