Beware what's inside gift boxes. --Michelle Liew
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A box, on my patio.
No sender, no note.
A wicked gleam surrounds it---
The look that beckons---
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UNWRAP ME.
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It seemed a blessing.
Inside, dollar notes, bundled up.
A mink cloak, finally, my style!
A crown with rubies---now, why not?
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I flaunted on the street
Cloak billowing, coins jingling.
A mere glance at peasants---
I mean, my neighbours.
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And then---
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My cloak, moth eaten.
Gold? No more.
The crown---iron.
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The townsfolk laughed.
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Their blessing.
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My gifts now, untouched.
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This poem is entirely original. AI tags are coincidental.
About the Creator
Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin
Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.


Comments (4)
Don't set your worth on things, but on people <3
Sometimes, things are always too good to be true. Loved your poem!
Hidden meanings, I will check gifts from now on. Well Done Michelle!!
Always check gifts from unknown sources , excellent work