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The Blessing Trap

Poetry on Blessings

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 10 months ago 1 min read
The Blessing Trap
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Beware what's inside gift boxes. --Michelle Liew

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A box, on my patio.

No sender, no note.

A wicked gleam surrounds it---

The look that beckons---

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UNWRAP ME.

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It seemed a blessing.

Inside, dollar notes, bundled up.

A mink cloak, finally, my style!

A crown with rubies---now, why not?

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I flaunted on the street

Cloak billowing, coins jingling.

A mere glance at peasants---

I mean, my neighbours.

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And then---

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My cloak, moth eaten.

Gold? No more.

The crown---iron.

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The townsfolk laughed.

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Their blessing.

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My gifts now, untouched.

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This poem is entirely original. AI tags are coincidental.

inspirational

About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Mother Combs9 months ago

    Don't set your worth on things, but on people <3

  • Sometimes, things are always too good to be true. Loved your poem!

  • Gregory Payton10 months ago

    Hidden meanings, I will check gifts from now on. Well Done Michelle!!

  • Always check gifts from unknown sources , excellent work

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