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I Thought The Rain Knew

Poetry on Blessings

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 10 months ago β€’ Updated 10 months ago β€’ 1 min read
I Thought The Rain Knew
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Blessings can be disguised, indeed. Michelle Liew

πŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉ

Gold against my skin,

Its touch cool, assuring,

Bringing fortune as it dropped.

πŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉ

Then came silver,

Wrapping, a shawl,

Comfort around my head.

πŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉ

Then-rust fell.

πŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉ

The sky turned sour.

Petals turned black.

I had thought the rain knew my heart.

πŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉπŸ–€πŸŒΉ

This poem is entirely original. Any AI tags is coincidental.

inspirational

About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Tiffany Gordon9 months ago

    WOW! Gorgeously-written!

  • Mother Combs9 months ago

    Wonderfully written, Michelle <3

  • Gabriel Huizenga10 months ago

    Beautiful work, Michelle; that closing line is a deep, deep well of reflective emotion!

  • That was so poignantly beautiful. Loved your poem!

  • Alex H Mittelman 10 months ago

    I wish golden rain would rain! We could all use a rain shower! Wonderful!

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