the blackcurrant joy
a Shakespearean sonnet

I will drown in their refreshin’ juices
tiny bits of seeds on my tongue, teeth, lips
the palate relishes its finesse fete
fatten enormously in its own gown
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it reminds me of a berry hunt, hot
summer in my garden later, mouth stuffed
with raspberry, strawberry, cherry taste –
complementin’ an unusual trip
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all the shadows from behind the tall trees
could not be irradiated by the truth
at the root of all this philosophy
of not bein’ involved in greedy myths
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tell me now, god of nature, if you dare
is it justice, got stuck in my throat, fierce?
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October 2022
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Moon Desert
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BA in Cultural Studies
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You're very good at these!