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The Bitter End

By Angel Whelan

By Angel WhelanPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read

Such cruel, wind-whipped words

Solid ground crumbles, I fall.

My tears burn. He’s ice.

heartbreak

About the Creator

Angel Whelan

Angel Whelan writes the kind of stories that once had her checking her closet each night, afraid to switch off the light.

Finalist in the Vocal Plus and Return of The Night Owl challenges.

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  • Paul Stewart3 years ago

    This is very powerful - in such a few words you conveyed so much raw emotion!

  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    Those words were so visceral. I felt each line like a punch to the gut. Excellent writing (but I hope that's not how you're feeling...if so sending big hugs to you.)

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