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The odd man who’s spent
His whole life burdened and bent
Asks where the sky went
About the Creator
Sam Spinelli
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Quotation from Friedrich Nietzsche "He who wrestles long with monsters should beware lest he himself become a monster. And if you gaze long into an abyss, the abyss also gazes into you. Man is not destroyed by suffering, but by the meaning he makes of it."
By LUCCIAN LAYTH7 days ago in Critique
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‘Burdened and bent… asking where the sky went’ such a profound haiku, that man only needed to look up. This was a beautiful call for action, while still being sensitive.
Whoaaaa, that hit me so hard. Loved your Haiku!