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The 4 Elements of a Breakup

A loose interpretation

By LouisPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read

No fulcrum to move

Your hard immovable eyes

Uncompromising

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Laughing companions

Music, the clink of glasses

My frail heart is warmed

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These tears dripping down

Your precious light leaving me

Falling down my face

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Sorrows on the wind

Blowing up, up, up, away

Into the clear sky

love poems

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Louis

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