That One Forest at the Back of That One House
A poem between two poets

I’ve built you a home in the forest
We used to burst through the leaves and make them flutter
The river is nearby to nourish you
Maybe one day we could go swimming
And when it freezes you could slide
And when it thaws we could smash the ice and break plates like we used to
We can listen to the cracks of the tree bark
And the squirrels race through the thrush
Sometimes I think we are still there
One day we even tried to really live there
That was a sad day
But the forest looked so alive
We used to scream all the time
And giggle between the trees
We used roots as step ladder lines
To go down or up
We would always get so winded by the breeze
Going down or up
And the archways?
Those were our portals into that magical world
And that log?
A balance beam covered in moss and mushroom to practice on
We always took a left, the same path
Except when we did that battle in the woods that one time
Remember the dirt bike riders?
They were so loud
Remember the little dwarf toilets?
We found so many acorns treasures there
Do you think we’ll go back one day?
I’m scared they chopped it down
What if it’s different?
What if it’s the same but we’re different?
Do you think it’ll still feel like home?
Definitely.
About the Creator
Oneg In The Arctic
A queer storyteller and poet of arctic adventures, good food, identity, mental health, and more.
Co-founder of Queer Vocal Voices
Water is Life ✊



Comments (12)
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Well done, Oneg and congratulations!
Woot!
Memories are such little imps...you never know how to greet them. hope the trees still stand.
Such a warm window into childhood, with the rich nostalgia and quiet worries of the present-day framing the whole thing beautifully. Another brilliant entry, Oneg!
You really brought it home with those final lines
Made me think of my childhood backyard, it was huge and full of trees and wonderful places to play and pretend ... I miss those days. Incredible piece, happy and sad all at once - like life I suppose 🩷
Nice take on the challenge
The reader is left with a sense of the enduring connection between the narrator and this special place, and the power of nostalgia to evoke a strong sense of belonging, thank you very much for sharing, love your works, hope to read more, subscribed.
Nice. Makes me think of my move back to my home state.
Wow! Great poem!
mm, this felt like home.💙