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Terribly Real In A Terribly False World

Why she felt so much pain

By Colleen Millsteed Published 4 years ago 1 min read
Terribly Real In A Terribly False World
Photo by Jane Boyd & ECE Workshops on Unsplash

She wears her pain as a shroud

Never given a chance to miss it,

She uses it to shore up her strength

Her coldness, her hardness elicits.

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Her pain is second to none, real

She’d be off balance, maybe ill,

Without the constant soul ache

Buried deeply inside her self will.

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With every beat of her pure heart

Throbbing in time with her pulse,

Drumming and vibrating in tune

Sweet torture, not able to repulse.

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With every move, she feels fire

Electrically sizzling from top to toe,

Burning, searing, bursts of flame

Her master to which she kowtows.

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She couldn’t understand, why her

So she learnt to live with the pain,

Gave up looking for a cure, an out

How’d she feel if it was to abstain.

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I knew why she felt so much pain

Because she is terribly real, pure,

In a terribly false, sadistic world

The reason for her pain, I assure.

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About the Creator

Colleen Millsteed

My first love is poetry — it’s like a desperate need to write, to free up space in my mind, to escape the constant noise in my head. Most of the time the poems write themselves — I’m just the conduit holding the metaphorical pen.

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