Tattoos And Cigarettes
Love And Devastation
By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished about a year ago • 1 min read

I’ve learned the hard way that love equals pain. Nothing is real without piercing the skin
Your smoke ring, like love, dissipates like burnt paper. The scent hangs around, a vale of poisonous vapor
Your promises leave a bad taste in my mouth, burning my lips filling my heart with doubt
I can see the damage, yet I can’t seem to stop. A bad habit I am not willing to drop
If I would listen to my heart, I might undo the damage, quit this addiction to you and finally be salvaged
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition
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Comments (6)
This was such a great poem, paralleling an action with such vivid words.
The internal rhyme gave this a delicious flow! Great work, Kelli!
I want to say something facetious about nicotine patches - but getting that hit some other way definitely feels like the way to go here. Great poem.
Hi Ki - As you noticed in my story 'Eyes' -Tats = 'Good Hurt.' Addiction runs the gamut of late from 'puter games-Cigs to 'l.o.v.e'...! - The 'Perfect Amount' of Ki Flare...! j.k.bud.in.l.a.
Nicely done as always!
This is a big promise to make of oneself. Good work.