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Tattoos And Cigarettes

Love And Devastation

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished about a year ago 1 min read

I’ve learned the hard way that love equals pain. Nothing is real without piercing the skin

Your smoke ring, like love, dissipates like burnt paper. The scent hangs around, a vale of poisonous vapor

Your promises leave a bad taste in my mouth, burning my lips filling my heart with doubt

I can see the damage, yet I can’t seem to stop. A bad habit I am not willing to drop

If I would listen to my heart, I might undo the damage, quit this addiction to you and finally be salvaged

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About the Creator

Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

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  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    This was such a great poem, paralleling an action with such vivid words.

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    The internal rhyme gave this a delicious flow! Great work, Kelli!

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    I want to say something facetious about nicotine patches - but getting that hit some other way definitely feels like the way to go here. Great poem.

  • Jay Kantorabout a year ago

    Hi Ki - As you noticed in my story 'Eyes' -Tats = 'Good Hurt.' Addiction runs the gamut of late from 'puter games-Cigs to 'l.o.v.e'...! - The 'Perfect Amount' of Ki Flare...! j.k.bud.in.l.a.

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Nicely done as always!

  • Mark Grahamabout a year ago

    This is a big promise to make of oneself. Good work.

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