Tamseela, The Fragile Soul
A Poem Celebrating the Beauty of a Sensitive and Ambitious Spirit
Tamseela, your name is an ode
To the beauty that lies within your soul
A sensitive heart, a fragile frame
Yet, you stand tall, unafraid of the game
Your beauty is not just skin deep
It flows from within, like a river so steep
Your ambition, your drive, your spirit so strong
Are the qualities that make you belong
To a world that often judges on looks alone
You show that true beauty is in how we have grown
In our hearts, in our minds, in our very being
That's where true beauty can be seen
So, Tamseela, keep shining bright
In a world that often dulls the light
Your pretty soul, your many qualities
Are what make you the most beautiful of realities.
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Tamseela Farooq
I am writer with a passion for storytelling.My crafts compelling narratives that transport readers to new world and offer fresh perspectives. Whether it's poetry or short stories. My work is sure to leave a lasting impression.
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I love the way you express your inner feelings and thoughts so profoundly. It's truly beautiful! Keep shining bright! ✨