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In the beginning
You hung the stars in the sky
to light up the night.
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If the stars talked, oh
the stories they could tell of
what makes my heart beat.
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โThen God made two great lights: the greater light to rule the day, and the lesser light to rule the night. He made the stars also. God set them in the firmament of the heavens to give light on the earth,โGenesisโฌ โญ1โฌ:โญ16โฌ-โญ NKJV
Amen.
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Colleen Walters
Just a girl who likes to write poems, usually inspired by events and people in my Florida life.. Always be you, because you are awesome. You matter. You are enough.. โค๏ธ
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Comments (3)
I love this because it speaks of someone powerful. 'Hung' makes it sound like the stars could be removed. That magical element excites me. The last haiku creates wonder, within a mini story. Speaking so fondly of the creator, and of the stars brings such a light and positive energy to your poem. This I like very much. Outstanding work Colleen. I made it here in the end. Even though I am suffering with a cold. I'm sorry if I took too long ๐คโค๏ธ๐ค
This is so peaceful, it really feels like a quiet moment of awe for creation. โจ
This was so wonderful and the photos were stunning!