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Talking To The Rain

Almost Time To Go

By Dan R FowlerPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
Top Story - May 2024

Talking To The Rain

As I sit upon a rotting wooden porch listening,

I hear the words of falling rain dancing.

Across the surface once placid but now rippled,

Time the imaginary artist with cheeks dimpled.

It smiles at me across the void now breached,

Speaking of things it knows I can’t bequeath.

To promise things to others I no longer possess,

Is like creation urging eternity to acquiesce.

The winds I feel tug on my spirit to come,

To look beyond time’s spiderweb, to succumb.

But it’s not the time to surrender one’s persistence,

But to fortify one’s stance, and bolster one’s perseverance.

“Come let me show you,” the spirits chant,

Knowing full well to leave this place I can’t.

But I seek to know the hidden secrets it carries,

Ones often taunted by eternity’s emissaries.

“Be gone with you and speak of this no more,”

Orders the man of abundant years, seven score.

It’s not time to surrender my will, this human device,

Even though the glimpse I see may beckon and entice.

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Dan R Fowler

Dan R. Fowler. 71, writing is more than a hobby, it's a place for me to become anyone I choose to be, visit mystical scenes, or swim deep within my brain. e-book paperback, or audible. type dan r fowler on the search line. Amazon

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  • Esala Gunathilake2 years ago

    Congrats on your top story.

  • Rowan Finley 2 years ago

    Great job

  • Joe Patterson2 years ago

    Congratulations on your top story.

  • Kendall Defoe 2 years ago

    Well said!

  • Congrats on your TS.

  • Fantastic writing.

  • Ameer Bibi2 years ago

    Thought provoking 👌

  • Linda Goodman2 years ago

    Well written

  • Jasmine Whitmore2 years ago

    Deep and well written!

  • Andrea Corwin 2 years ago

    Lovely poem - death is cheated, it’s not time. Rain dancing and time’s spiderweb are wonderful descriptions. 💕

  • Tina D'Angelo2 years ago

    Dan, I love your poetry!

  • Rachel Steinmetz2 years ago

    Absolutely stunning!! Loved every carefully chosen word!

  • Deep and well written!

  • Anu Mehjabin2 years ago

    Eloquent, introspective, captivating.💝 and congratulations🎉

  • shanmuga priya2 years ago

    Fantastic poem!

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