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Takes Its Toll

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By Paul StewartPublished 3 years ago β€’ 1 min read
Takes Its Toll
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I make it look like this is all a big game

Like I could take or leave it all the same

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It's just words, expressions, and structure

Formatting, cadence, my addition to culture

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However, its more than just clever wordplay

It's more than just fiery linguistic affray

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For me, even in jest, this is very serious

I work hard and drive myself delirious

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Trying to pick the right words to flow and roll

Trying to be the best me, often takes its toll

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Thanks for reading!

Another from my WIP folders. Spring Cleaning has been fun. Hope some people have enjoyed them haha.

Anyway, here are a couple of others related...I think:

You can also take a look at the rest of my work here.

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About the Creator

Paul Stewart

Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.

The Accidental Poet - Poetry Collection out now!

Streams and Scratches in My Mind coming soon!

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  • Ruth Stewart3 years ago

    Good work.

  • Oh yeah, I feel this one. You pretty much have me pegged.

  • Novel Allen3 years ago

    We all love this writing sctick, we grumble and complain, yet we keep going. It's in our blood. Can't deny it. Life is what it is, everything is a crap shoot.

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    Relatable, for sure. Well done.

  • Mo Darasi3 years ago

    Oh great poem! And so relatable 🀣.. I love the line "Formatting, cadence, my addition to culture" and how you linked it to the line just before

  • Kristen Balyeat3 years ago

    I can totally relate to this, Paul! Great job!

  • Bex Jordan3 years ago

    Oh, I love and feel this one! "It's more than just fiery linguistic affray," great line πŸ”₯

  • Test3 years ago

    For sure πŸ–€

  • Test3 years ago

    I appreciate the rhyme scheme and format of this poem, well thought out! I also like your vocabulary choices and word placements! I can tell you put a lot of work into this piece. Nice work Paul!

  • Dana Crandell3 years ago

    I can relate to this! Great job, Paul!

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