
The pretty white clouds
roll by like wispy carpets
Can I hitch a ride?
(。◕‿◕。✿)
I'm afraid of heights
maybe because I have no
reason not to be.
About the Creator
Colleen Walters
Just a girl who likes to write poems, usually inspired by events and people in my Florida life.. Always be you, because you are awesome. You matter. You are enough.. ❤️
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Reader insights
Nice work
Very well written. Keep up the good work!
Top insights
Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions


Comments (3)
Cute, dreamy and a little dizzying in the best way lol! You’ve got me staring at clouds now… thinking maybe I should hitch a ride too. 💖
I'm afraid of heights too but a magic carpet ride on a cloud sounds wonderful. Loved your poem!
beautiful. I always thought I was afraid of heights until I realized that it wasn't the height that scared me. It was the fear of falling.