Symphonic
A Sensational II Challenge Poem
The lightest brush of wind grazes, floating in before rising to enwrap entwined bodies misted beneath love's sheer veil
Joy encompasses and draws nigh as my lips taste of your essence in a flooded need for nourishment to suffuse my empty soul
The vision of you envelops, harmonizes - overwhelming all existence with resounding vibrations to complete love’s journey just begun
Sweetly scented petals of white mimic awakened sensations, drifting like snow through the air, stoking, provoking a deep-seated need
Across the skies and through the branches, love's deafening echoes sound gloriously in a triumphant symphony of union divine
(Photo Courtesy of Couleur, Pixabay)
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Cindy Calder
From Charleston SC - "I am still learning." Michelangelo
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you are among one of the best writers, keep up the good work
So well written Cindy!
Hi Cindy I have had to re read, then read out loud (for me to truely appreciate poetry I have to ‘hear it’ - the flow, imagery, emotion, cadence etc.) I’m trying to best describe the profound impact on me. I hope this is enough. Your poem is a sublime gift to the Vocal+ community. Thank you for writing. With sincere gratitude. Pauline 🌸
Such lovely flow of beautiful masterfully crafted phrases!! Wonderful work, Cindy!
Beautiful
This felt a little sultry to me... or is that just me??? 😅
Simply said, beautiful poetry. A susurrus of senses.
I feel like I'm missing out;
My goodness, that was so gorgeous! You never fail to impress me. Loved your poem!
Wonderful.
Every line resonates with such a magnificent beauty; this feels like a glorious anthem for love and union. Wonderful, wonderful work!
Oh that last line was so lovely 'union divine'. What a beautiful piece :)
Very beautiful
You are a master of beautiful poetic words, Cindy.
This is quite lovely. Well done.
This reads almost like a Shakespeare sonnet. Great work.
Very eloquent, well done
Wow, well done, Cindy! That flows so perfectly!