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swimming lessons in quicksand

a poem

By Munro CampbellPublished 4 years ago 1 min read
swimming lessons in quicksand
Photo by Jeremy Bezanger on Unsplash

the rays pierce the curtains drawn tight

a star desperate for shine

another matinee morning

too late to join the line

gentle ticks from another's wrist

cuffed to a foreign flow

nothing novel in repeating

this performance for show

keeping up old appearances

familiar pitied grins

from a world gone apathetic

in quicksand, learned to swim

no current is misdirected

too turbulent, too strong

to withstand this bed-ridden raft

no match is any storm

thanks for reading! feel free to let me know what you think or hit the heart if you liked it. tips are appreciated but wholly optional. much love!

sad poetry

About the Creator

Munro Campbell

writer by vocation, not profession. embracing the artist's struggle. | blog: thoughtcritic.co

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