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Sweet, Sweet

A Mind Full of Storms

By Amanda StarksPublished 4 years ago 1 min read
Sweet, Sweet
Photo by Jari Hytönen on Unsplash

Do not go gently into that

Sweet, sweet night

It's always the same warnings

The same terrible fears

Of my mind being overtaken

By that sweet, sweet darkness.

Within wanderings I find

A sky of grey and green

The air heavy; oppressive

The shadows heightened and deepened

By the approaching lightning.

But some days those long shadows

Are very kind and welcoming, indeed

They give me a reason to rest

Half alive and half-dreaming

In a sweet, sweet cocoon of storm clouds.

Yet those clouds are not beautiful pillows to rest my head

They are harbingers of destruction and ruin

And falling for their lies

Has become a sweet, sweet escape.

surreal poetry

About the Creator

Amanda Starks

Fantasy writer, poet, and hopefully soon-to-be novelist who wants to create safe spaces to talk about mental health. Subscribe to my free newsletter at www.amandastarks.com for updates!

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  • Hannah E. Aaron11 months ago

    The two ending lines hit sooo hard!! The use of Thomas’s poem and its familiarity is also really cool!

  • Lightning Bolt ⚡11 months ago

    I can not imagine why this would be one of your least popular poems. The approaching lightning did it for me! ⚡💙⚡

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