You look so peaceful
sleeping there.
Lost in slumber’s quiet
embrace, your busy mind
at rest.
Are you dreaming,
anticipating simple
pleasures yet to come?
Or ready to slay a giant,
armed with nothing
but a small
pebble, worn smooth
by faith…
It’s quite beautiful, really
because you look
so peaceful
Sleeping there.
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Colleen Walters
Just a girl who likes to write poems, usually inspired by events and people in my Florida life.. Always be you, because you are awesome. You matter. You are enough.. ❤️
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This is so peaceful 💖✨ The stillness and Quietness of the moon fulfills it all.
I just love the concept of sleeping outside under the moon while camping with the tent window open.
This is lovely 😊