Sweat Level Critical
It’s so freakin’ hot out there 🥵
I get out of the shower
And within the hour
I have sweat under my tits
And stinking up my pits
I’m having such a schvitz
I’m ready to call it quits
I can’t function in this humidity
I’m thinking in terms of morbidity
One more ounce of perspiration
Will surely cause my expiration 💀
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Leslie Writes
Another struggling millennial. Writing is my creative outlet and stress reliever.
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Fabulous job! So cleverly written!
I sweat more just after showering that at any other time. It's infuriating! 😁
I get out of the shower and within a minute I'm sweating, lol. Totally can relate!
Hilarious-Loved it! ❤️ Feel the pain!
I choked on my coffee reading this! Not even iced...sad. ✌🏾😀
Me baking in the sun on Sunday 😩